When I was around 15, a palm reader at a renaissance fair told me that I’d live to be 63.
In other words, she told me I would die when I am 63.
Which is something no reputable palm reader or fortune teller (HA! oh, ha ha ha ha ha ha HA! Reputable palm reader!) is ever supposed to tell anyone, I suppose on the grounds that if they’re wrong, their pronouncement could become a self-fulfilling prophecy, or, if they’re right, who’d want to know? Just keep it vague and positive, right?
I don’t know why I remembered that recently. Maybe I felt like I was wasting time, dragging my feet, failing in my quest to really live every moment of whatever time I may have left as fully as possible – and with love and laughter.
But if we assume for the sake of argument the palm reader was right – that gives me only a few years, with an awful lot left to do.
Like getting a move on the query letter for my book, and deciding who to send it to.
(“Mr. Churchill, don’t you know you are never to end a sentence with a preposition?” Churchill to presumptuous twit: “Sir, that is a presumption up with which I will not put.” But I digress.)
I’ve been composing the letter in my head, reading the blogs and websites about form and what kind of letters are effective, and which agents represent what kind of books, and looking for agents who will look at memoirs, and somewhere in all that, I read that memoir agents are sick of books involving cancer, particularly survival stories.
Well, mine isn’t a cancer survival story, because Mike didn’t survive.
It’s a love survival story.
But it has “cancer” in the title.
So I changed the name of my book from “Detour in Cancerland, in which a Ridiculous Woman Attempts to Defer Widowhood through Remodeling (and Lust) to “Love, Death and Carpentry, in which a Ridiculous Woman etc….”
And then I started to think, well, if they don’t like the word “cancer” in the title, they’re not going to like the word “death,” exactly, either, are they?
But the point isn’t the title: it’s to write a query letter that catches an agent’s attention enough for them to want to see the entire book. If it ever gets published the publisher will probably change the title anyway.
I’ve heard back from both my friends to whom I gave the book because I knew they’d be honest with me if they thought it was awful, and they both loved it and said I should move ahead with it.
Which led me to think that maybe I should have a few more “beta” readers to be sure I’ve gotten broad enough response to it. Every woman within 20 years of my age, when I’ve told them what it’s about, or just told them the original title, has said, “oh, man, I’d read that!” OK, so maybe I shouldn’t change the title.
The only other people I’ve given the book to are my brothers, one of whom read it and returned the thumb drive it was on to me, with no comment.
He’s the hypersensitive one, though, and there were things in there that I knew would upset him, and I told him in advance I wasn’t really looking for his comments, I only wanted him to read it so he wouldn’t be surprised, in case a miracle happens and the book actually gets published. I just hope he isn’t too upset. We’re having Thanksgiving together.
My other brother, the older one who is very free with his opinions (solicited or not) on pretty much everything, has started to read it.
Started 7 weeks ago.
He says he’s on page 90, but he too has offered no comment, which is very unusual. My friends read it in less than two weeks. When I heard back from them I just told my brothers that I was going ahead with it anyway. If he got to page 90 he’s pretty much read anything that would have mentioned him, anyway. So nuts to him.
Being irritated with my brother caused me to remember that I may have living brothers and sisters-in-law, with whom my late husband refused to associate, and who are not mentioned at all in the book (except for one fleeting mention of the smoking habit of one of them), which sent me into another round of paralyzed anxiety.
Both of my parents are gone, as are my late husband’s. So do I really need to worry about what other unmentioned “family” members might think about the story, which is true anyway, when they aren’t even mentioned in it?
Isn’t that supposed to be something the publisher, if there is ever to be one, will worry about?
Which brings me back to the query letter.
And dying at 63.
And thinking about all the things I haven’t accomplished yet and how little time I have left if that damn, bored, mean-spirited palm reader (really, who would do that to a 15 year old kid?) was right.
Things like finding a new relationship, getting one more really good job, getting my daughter situated happily and safely out on her own with support provided by someone who isn’t me (because she’ll have to get used to that so we have to get started) and learning to sail and seeing Alaska before it melts completely and making the crossing of the Atlantic even though climate change is causing more and more huge rogue waves and the crews of cruise ships seem increasingly inept in their seamanship and skiing again and being able to buy a summer house in Maine and tracing some of the routes and visiting some of the (milder Mediterranean) ports of call described in the Patrick O’Brian books and taking a screenwriting class and learning Latin and taking some kind of luxury rail travel and a steamboat trip on the Mississippi if climate change hasn’t caused prolonged drought and it is deep enough for that and getting paid singing and speaking gigs and publishing a series of Ridiculous woman books based on my continuing misadventures.
Which brings me back to that query letter…
Trying to conquer my fears and quell my OCD induced anxiety, but fully intending to be writing still on my 64th, nay, even my 84th birthday (take that, bored, mean palm reader lady), I remain,
Your quaking, querulous, query-less, but still questing,
5 thoughts on “Let’s Take a Moment to Overthink This”
I don’t know, just thinking out of the box here; maybe the fortuneteller meant you lived til 63… As in… 63, and 64, and 65. As in inclusively not exclusively. Almost, like a lie of omission. You wouldn’t NOT live beyond 63, that was your assumption. Maybe she was like just busting your balls. Just a thought
Same. Alas, I’m not at your stage and eyeball deep in hockey tournaments so don’t ask me when I’ll get to that stage.
Gonna do it though. Because I wanna be just like you when I grow up. 😊
I love hearing from you, Claudette – thanks for the support. Look at it this way, hockey-season-driving-the-kids-wise: at least you’re not in Saskatchewan (I hear there’s some wide-open spaces out there that take an hour or ten to traverse on the way to games!) 😉 Wishing you a few hours a day in the coffee shop to finish up your query letter!
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I’m not complaining. Exactly. 🙄 Lol. It just seems that when I have the most urge to write, the timing is off. But this kind of family life won’t be here forever…so I do what I can. Sort of